My Creative Writing
I learn to put fullstops at the end of the sentences.
My writing makes sense.
One Morning I had to go to my Dental Appointment to fix my sore tooth. l was so brave. l was a Little bit Scared. it was a little bit sore. l felt better. l was Happy that my tooth came out. Now every morning it ls not sore. when i whet out l Smiled and that was the end l felt fantastic When i whet went home and l also felt happy.
What a fantastic story you have shared Achilles. I'm so glad that you no longer have a toothache. What will you continue to do to prevent any more tooth extractions?
ReplyDeletethak you ms wylam you are the best
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