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Thursday 12 March 2020

Bike Adventure




One day l went up a tall big fat Mountain. l went with my cousin and we saw lots of animal poop.
Because it was a farm.  It was a big Mountain my cousin was on a bike adventure. 

 His bike had lots of cool colours . We stayed on the mountain until night time .

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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous19 March 2020 at 15:46

    Hi Achilles,
    It’s me Isitolo. I like how your story made me laugh with happiness.
    Maybe next time check your work.
    Keep up the Good work!

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  2. Anonymous19 March 2020 at 16:29

    Hi Achilles,
    It’s me Everly I like how you went to a farm on a mountain. It made me laugh when you said “Dog Poop”. Maybe next time you could put the writing to fit on the page.

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  3. Anonymous9 April 2020 at 22:54

    Hi Achilles
    it's me Alf I liked your writing because it is funny and interesting how your cousin haves an colourful bike and when that took a poop and I hope you learn hips of stuff like the padake. Keep up wonderful work Achilles.

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  4. Anonymous14 May 2020 at 19:32

    thak you all of you


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